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Breathe.
Keep going.
Do it again.
Breathe.
Prove them all wrong.
Breathe.
Show them no fear.
They cannot hurt you.
Just whisper in your ear.
Breath.
Keep going.
I know you can if I can.
Feel me?
Iím helping.
Itís hard for me too.
But remember they cannot hurt you.
This is for my friend. I hope it reaches her somehow. She needs it.
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silentlytaken Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2007
love it! :)
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MangaXBunnyXMelody Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2007
oo shank yoiu!
(lmao)
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Kimiryu Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2007   Writer
I really like this poem. There's something about it that I can't put my finger upon. Maybe it's the fact that you speak from a point of view like you are the arms that protect her and keep her striving to stay alive? It's very beautiful.

--xRyu.
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MangaXBunnyXMelody Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2007
Thank you very much for the comment!
I also appreciate that add to your friends, especially since I don't have many!
Thank you very much!
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KoR-3 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2007
HI ARE WE THE SAME EXACT POETS
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MangaXBunnyXMelody Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2007
lol
Maybe we are.
I love how you write, and I've wrote like that many times so, perhaps we are the same^_^
Totally weird>.<
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KoR-3 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2007
Well technically my style changes :p
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biting-bullets Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2007  Hobbyist
Like the way you piece it up, and keep it simple.
I hope your friend gets through whatever it is she's dealing with :)
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